Sorry I just could not finish this. Great idea and foundation, but the poor editing if there was editing even done killed it. This story turned into long scattered thoughts like one would find in a daily journal. I have no problem with a personal journal type story, however the sentences are not smooth and do not flow every well. However, I do like the idea and the foundation of the story this author started out with she just did not continue along the original lines. I gave it a 2 just for the idea but that is all there is in this book for me.

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